Review On Pitch

Review Of The Pitch 

On Friday my group and i presented our pitch of our film opening called Sheeps Riots. It about 3 boys that live in a urban area, they're affected by the riots and 2 two of the boys decide to loot while the third boy feels its a bad idea and stays at home. We presented our pitch via prezi in front of our teacher and our peers. From the presentation i feel that me and my group done a decent job in informing our peers on what our film is about, the plot to the opening etc. We we're organised about how we wanted to present it and gave our class an opportunity to ask us questions. 

However there were things that we should improve on:

• Target Audience: We didn't give a specific age or type of teenager that our film would appeal to, we just gave an age bracket of 15-18 year old. 
• Sound: Although we said we was gonna use Reggae music, we wasn't specif on that either because, reggae music was based on the riots in the 1970's and 80's and we said that we're gonna use reggae music to contradict the fast pace of the intro. We should have said that we we're going to use mellow reggae music instead.  
• Synopsis: We didn't give a good enough story line that links with the movie, to improve this we can make sure that the consequences of  what happens in the opening develops as if the movie would go on.